top of page

Military Kid Tanka

Kate U.


Cardboard suffuses

My empty wooden dollhouse

Voices echoing

Weaving to a fuller place

A home none of us have known


A jumble of life

Is unpacked, yet entangled

Old and new twisted

Try to brush it out, but still

Last year’s dust coats the fresh walls


Step on odd sidewalks

Soles tracking differences

Every day the same

Pretending I belong here

Until the months convince me


Strangers’ faces stare

Specters on a TV screen

Then I memorize

Each one without forgetting

The countless people before


Scars wind through my heart

But healed and fortifying

The structure of life

Affection bleeds into view

Crafting a brighter sunrise



This poem is modeled after a tanka, a type of Japanese poem. Tankas typically tell stories of emotions or pivotal moments. This story includes both, depicting the emotional journey of moving.

1 Comment


Guest
Jan 04

Beautiful!👏

Like

STAY INFORMED

Get blog posts, updates, and newsletters straight to your inbox!

Thanks for subscribing!

Bloom takes pride in being a safe, nonpartisan platform for military teens to share their stories and be empowered. All of the opinions expressed in articles belong solely to the author and are not a reflection of the views of Bloom or the National Military Family Association. This website does not intend to, and should never be used as a replacement for professional medical advice.

  • Instagram
  • TikTok
  • Facebook
  • YouTube
  • Twitter
  • real
02_NMFA_bloom_2022_full_color_logo_lockup.png
Nmfa_Logo_Full_Color_Rgb_900px_w_72ppi.png

Bloom powered by the National Military Family Association

@ 2022 Bloom. All rights reserved.

bottom of page